
[Report This]Date: 04-24-07 - 09:31 am Title: Chapter Eight - Show Me
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.
[Report This]Date: 04-24-07 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter Eight - Show Me
I just read this whole story for the first time.
that was sweet, scary, exciting, crazy and complicated all rolled into one. I loved it and I can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 04-23-07 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter Eight - Show Me
Wow, these last two chapters was VERY nice. I CAN'T STAND THAT CREED! URGH. Let him have an accident and let it be done with him. grrrrrrrrrrr LOL I can't wait for the next chapters.
Rolletti
[Report This]Date: 04-23-07 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter Eight - Show Me
Dont let go Logan. Dont ever let go.
[Report This]Date: 04-23-07 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter Eight - Show Me
Okay. I just about cried when she told him "I can make all the bad go away." That, and her observation outside his door that he's always beat up when she finds him. It just builds the tension for the confrontation with Victor that you know is looming around the corner. Thanks for this update.
[Report This]Date: 04-23-07 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter Seven - Die Without You
Yikes! That is Vic at his psychotic best. :) I am so happy that 'Ro came back for him although I hope they both hit the road before Vic takes a big bite out of them both! Good job.
[Report This]Date: 04-23-07 - 09:08 am Title: Chapter Seven - Die Without You
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
[Report This]Date: 04-22-07 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter Seven - Die Without You
oooo Vic and Logan....that's gonna be a fight. And what surprised to see 'Ro outside that bar after Logan was kicked out.
[Report This]Date: 04-22-07 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Seven - Die Without You
Ororo you take that money and run!
[Report This]Date: 04-22-07 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Seven - Die Without You
Victor scares me in this fic. For real. Man, I hope Ororo watches her back because that mofo is a freakin' lunatic! Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 04-22-07 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Seven - Die Without You
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
[Report This]Date: 04-22-07 - 02:04 pm Title: Chapter Seven - Die Without You
I've been craving this update like chocolate. Vic's sinister and tangible. I love the thought processes he goes through during little mundane things like waking up and taking a whizz and realizing Ororo set him up. Sounds like a sweet car that he jacked, too.
I shivered when he said "You'll die without me." Brilliant.
Ororo driving Logan home on his motorcycle with him clinging to her like a teddy bear was inspired, too. You get so much of the impression that he needs her, and desperately, just from that one image. Great update. More, when life lets you.
[Report This]Date: 03-31-07 - 03:45 pm Title: Chapter Six - Young
Enjoying what you've written so far. Looking forward to the next update. :0)
[Report This]Date: 03-23-07 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter Six - Young
Great chapter!!!! Were did Ororo run to and when is going to have a faminly of her own. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
[Report This]Date: 03-14-07 - 12:46 am Title: Chapter Six - Young
Please update!
